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Hahah, lol, that ending xD Took me a few seconds to realize and then I laughed out loud :D

Neat comedy sketch, nothing too fancy but gets the humor across very well without looking too bland. Also, you've got a cool voice, I'll definitely watch more of your animations ^_^

Keep up the good work! ;)

Well...this was an awkward situation xD
But I liked the comedy sketch, was executed pretty well and your voice was clear, with no annoying sounds in the background or anything like that ^_^

For the next sketch, I'd maybe add a background and more characters intefering in the discussion, but it's up to you how you'll proceed ;) Nevertheless, keep this up!

SimpleColors responds:

Thaaanks a lot
When i started the channel i wanted to make it the animation simple and fast to make however i will try to make a basic animation for the background that i can use in the next videos

Thanks for your feedback

Hot damn! That was quite impressive. But I just can't get over the fact how genious the end was xD
At first you're like "meh, what a lame corpse chasing the main character" and then you realize that it's actually him, stuck in an endless time loop of preventing himself from being doomed, yet not able to change fate...

Anyways, very impressive job! The animations look nice, the shadows are implemented very well and the portal effect looks cool too. Overall, I think you did a pretty great job on this unusual animation, I'd definitely be happy if I created something like that ^_^

Only thing I can think of adding for your next time would be some sound effects and maybe more rough textures ( fur on monkey, blood vessels on the corpse etc.

This is a neat introduction to the animation! Definitely resembled the style of Alan Becker's animations, despite being a bit bland in some areas ^_^
I feel like the episode could've been better if it was a bit more fast-paced and had more action elements and/or suspense in it, but it's good for what it is. I'd like to see a sequel on this.

Good work and keep it up! ;)

Shriyansh responds:

Thank You So much for Viewing my Work. Thanks for The Suggestions. Thanks so much for Review, and yeah there will be more action elements in Next part. Thanks for Your Suggestions I really Appreciate it.

Not too bad! Looks quite intriguing, actually, despite being somewhat random ... xD
Your animation skills are pretty decent, the sound sync with the bird's dashes was good and I really liked that epic moment when it was quickly approaching the stickman and when he jumped over it everything was in slow motion. That looked really cool ^_^

Overall, I can see you making this into a very nice animation. To make it seem even better, I'd suggest maybe adding somewhat of an introduction between the two fighters at the start so we know why they're fighting and so on and also maybe add some cooler effects ( explosions? tornadoes? ) and maybe make the movements a bit smoother ;)

Good job! Keep this up! ^_^

This is quite a nice animation! :) I like the use of colors in it, the green looks very lively, and the upbeat music that accompanies all of that makes it seem more energetic.
Also, that end was quite cruel and I didn't expect anything like that at the startm but hey, as soon as he grabbed the mentos from the ground I knew what was coming to him :D

Great job on this animation! It looks neat, but I think that if you wanted to make something similar to that you could try to experiment with different camera angles, colors ( like, e.g. when something bad happens everything that's green turns red for about a second or it makes everything more blue-ish when there's a dramatic scene etc. Just an idea ^_^

Good job on all if that overall! Keep up the good work! ;^)

waldenanimations responds:

Thank you, those are really good advices, I'll keep them in mind :)

Well... this was kinda weird xD The scene where the button was pressed with the stretched out tongue was pretty strange, also, that background music ... just perfect, 10/10 xD
Could use either more color or motion with more detailed line art. But the humor which came from the mistake is still there ... or something

Neat. Keep this up ;) Also, your singing skills are awesome, keep using them more often and in more creative ways! ;D

PJW responds:

Thanks very much. That's really constructive :) I always appreciate detailed feedback. I'll take that on board for the next one I post.

Dear God, this was animated extremely well! The visuals are fantastic, and the glows and shadows make everything seem more cinematic and epic. The orchestra music added even more to this effect.
This is an astonishing animation! Glad to have come across this, I don't see animations this well composed every day ^_^

Damn, this is sick! Back again with an impressing and action-packed animation, huh? 0_0
I've just got to keep reminding myself that you create this with MS Powerpoint ( and the edit it in Adobe Premiere) and it turns out this awesome. I bet you used to create the most spectacular PP presentations in history when you got an assignment on that, lol xD

Also, are you planning on releasing anything big sometime soon? I think you were working on Paro D: Third Spoof, but do you know when you'll be finished with it ?

Chixman responds:

Thanks for reviewing! Actually I made this one in 2 days because I was in a hurry to finish it. Hehe when I was in school I wasnt using powerpoint to do this kind of stuff. I was still using Pivot Stickfigure Animator back then.

And yes, I was working on Paro D: Third Spoof. In fact, it's already out since September on Youtube. I have yet to release it in Newgrounds though. It's in my Youtube channel, check it out if you want.

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