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This wasn't too bad actually, if this is really your first animation, then you're off to a good start! The animations looked pretty decent and the fight was OK too ( I guess), but you should make the characters react to the attacks a bit more, especially when the guy with the sword was on the ground or in the air getting sliced up by the white stickman, he was just standing there not reacting to the attacks at all as if he was just a part of the background. Also, the sound effects a bit too repetitve.
Also, I think you should try to add more details to the background. Also, I think you should make the attacks look a bit more realistic. Also... ehm forget it. Just know, that this is a good start :^)

GazerDGreat responds:

Thnx for the tips I'm making part two

Neat :) I like the humor behind this, but I think the drawing style could've been improved on just a little and I also think that it's a bit too fast. I know it's meant to be 15 secs long. but I still think they could've been a bit slower.
Anyways, well done on that ^^

waymonds responds:

Thanks a lot! Yeah it is a bit too fast ^__^; I was trying to emulate the old cartoon modern fast talk and limited animation, like Jay Ward with a dash of Speed Racer.

Hands down guys, this is just pure gold.

The drawing looked nice and the jokes in this were just hilarious and genious. I'm in love with this animation! It*s just sooo good

Hahah, this is great! I especially liked the voice acting from this one dooodd, it was great! And the donuts look sexy too

waymonds responds:

Thanks! Can't have a Donut Party w/o sexy donuts! :D

Really nice details in the different places there and also quite nice action elements. Really this series so far. It would be nice seeing them fight in that organic thing, then getting out and fighting against it on the outside or something. Would be quite cool.
But anyways, good work on this awesome episode! ;P

Quite short, but still pretty cool!

Pretty good and interesting video, but I think that you should talk with a little bit more enthusiasm and make the videos a bit more "vivid", by maybe adding more animations, details, jokes and so on.

The videos are good, but I just think that you should express your character a bit more, it'll just be a bit more interesting to watch then :3

But still, well done :P

Looks pretty good, the only things that kind off bothered me was the vitality of the audience and also, the eyes at -0:27 don't make a lot of sense.
But despite all of that, you did a pretty good job on this :^)

Very neat little collab by you three.
Congratulations from me for Sirmi! :^)

Pretty decent so far! You're off into a good start! Keep doing what you're doing and just don't give up! ;)

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